portrait, larry

Hi Matt,

I’ve got sort of a resemblance, but definitely not the cuteness. Not sure what it is? Trouble with the nose, too flat?, trouble with the eyes, how do you get the direction of sight right? I think I’ll just draw the hand separately again. Too much outlining of the fingers? The knuckles  and shading to show the hand underneath were problems. How best to fade off the right side of the drawing?

Thanks,

Larry