landscape, larry

Hi Matt,

Tried to zig-zag the viewer up the stream. 

I was trying to suggest background foliage, fallen leaves and  and other misc  stuff. Not very successful, folks saw the fallen leaves as rocks and the background trees as bare. But I guess that also works. Is there a better way to approach that? Background getting muddy, but I thought ok since it’s the background? 

Please comment on the value structure and line work.

Larry