Homework from U tube Carole

I enjoyed the longer session and look forward to having more time to draw in fall semester.  I used gray toned paper and black wing.  While trying to correct various things like the tilt of the eye, the size relationships etc.  everything got too dark and too much erasing, and the white charcoal does not work with the graphite as we all found out.  I wanted to show that the model is turning away more, not sure what I should have done.