Hi Matt, this is Caitlin.
I’m submitting this piece for final critique. I tried to do all of the adjustments you suggested, like making the trees/mountains the darkest area, followed by the undersides of the clouds, then keeping the fields pale. Do you think the value structure is working now? I’m not sure. Is there any area you would adjust?
Please let me know anything else you would change to improve the piece.
Thanks very much.