I worked on your suggestions from last week. I’ve added color (cel-shaded) but I posted an uncolored one as I think it’s easier to see if the drawing can stand on its own. Feel free to critique anything you see. I “kind of” used the posted reference for shadows even if it’s not the reference for the pose.
Color choice? Any lines I should remove or add? Simplify the colors/folds on the shirt? A better way to handle the gradient on her forehead?