Hope you enjoyed your well earned vacation and nice to see you back. Anyways I have used the 4 box method which you suggested and no it wasn’t easy but I certainly didn’t have the same struggle as I did with the last one. Tried to pay attention to my line work and where I wanted the viewer to focus on so made my lines darker around the side of her face and tunic. However got a bit confused when it came to the table which if I went lighter didn’t provide enough contrast and going darker I wasn’t sure if that then became the focal point. Personally I wanted to go even darker but held off to see what your comments would be. Struggled as well with the mouth, not the shape or size, I think I pretty much got it, but more getting the shading right. I feel the shadow around her top lip doesn’t read right, looks more like she’s been eating out the jam pot than a shadow. Look forward to your critique.