I worked on your Last Feedback to make the lines more complicated and not cartoony and removed the black outline from some areas to mae them look more realistic, but the right breast still looks like a circle. I did not know how to fix it, and I putted bounce light there!
Furthermore, I used the Value scale that you taught me to make in photoshop last time, but
I struggled with matching the values of the Reference with the Painting in Photoshop.
I also tried to put the Shapes of the Shadow Areas at the Reference Photo to study the Shadow Areas.