Hi Matt!

I went the next step from my critique submission last week, adding the values. I had to work an extra shift this week so did not have as much time to work on this, but wanted to get as much done as I could to submit this week. I know something is off, my eyes are tired and I’m not ‘seeing’ it.

Your critique is appreciated.
Thank you,



Posted on

April 11, 2021

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