Motion Wendy

Dear Matt,

I chose this image for the motion part of composition through landsccape. I moved the boat slightly to the center and I have several questions. Can you see my value pattern ? Where do you look ? I wanted the viewer to look at the boat first, then at the foreground wave and then along the shoreline back to the boat and the sky. Does it work ? 

Also: are there enough empty areas (sand, dark cliff) or is the drawing too busy ? 

Finally, about the waves: they are not exactly in the sunlight, but they are white, so is there a way to render them without using the white charcoal pencil ? 

Thanks a lot,

Wendy

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Posted on

February 16, 2020

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