Firstly, I hope you are keeping well in light of this terrible virus which is affecting us all.
While I may well have another go at this painting, it is the final one I am sending to you. Therefore would appreciate you being as brutally honest as you are comfortable with. It can only help me in the long run. I implemented all the changes you mentioned in the first critique and although I learnt a lot about watercolour on the way, I certainly didn’t master many of the techniques such as soft edges, gradual transitions and many more which is sadly evident in the painting. However what I lack in watercolour skills I make up for in determination and not giving up. So really do welcome all the constructive criticism you can give me to help me improve on it. Many thanks