Life Drawing – new for critique – Lucille

Hi Matt,

   I was pleasantly surprised by how much less of a struggle everything felt during life drawing this time around and I’m feeling happy with this drawing for a lot of reasons… yet I felt like it would be a good one to submit for a critique because I can tell that theres A TON of room for improvement… I just can’t put my finger on what exactly.

 

I like that I’m finally being bolder with my marks but a few things I can see for myself is that as I was trying to build up line.. I accidentally got outline-y and I can tell there’s something not right going on with the breasts, and that possibly the head is too small?  I’m very interested to hear what you will say about the piece and where I can improve

 

thanks!

Skills

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January 20, 2020

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