Fred S practice

Hi Matt,
Lips practice from this saturday. Almost statisfied from the left one, even if looking after there are maybe too form lines on it.
On the other hand, there is this center one, i dont like it, default on it, lips too large regarding the nose, chin too dark bottom left and not well formed, and certainly more other things you can point out, please.
Two kind of drawing i can made in a same day session, i think the center one is bad, and yet it take me more time to do and i think i ruin it when trying to add more lines, shadows,etc.

I dont’ know why i struggle with the second, maybe the less form information on the left side of the face perturbing me and i was lost on how to render it. I made another try on this one last week too, and finally after erasing, retry, and not able to obtain something i was statified with, it goes to the trash with a big cross. Going again to it this week but no more good feeling on it.

This is an example of two kind of inconsistent drawing i can make, and i dont understand why, and it irritate me. What can help me to improve to avoid that ?
What do you think and can you help please ?
Am i doing too form lines ? how to be more economic, precise and put only the right form lines at the good place ? which one of your course do you think i should follow to improve regarding the sample of drawing i have put recently ?

Thanks in advance

-Fred

 

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Posted on

March 8, 2020

3 Comments

  1. Scott Shulman Shulman

    Beautiful Fred!

  2. Arjun Khode

    Wow. This drawing beats most of the drawings we see on Instagram out there. Just beautiful! Can’t wait to see more from you

  3. Frederic SERGENT

    Thanks a lot for your comments, Scott, Arjun, it pushing me upper.

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