figure, larry

Hi Matt,

I’m still working on this form line stuff. Trying to incorporate your comments from my last couple of drawings. Clean up the edge. Shade in the direction of the form. Add form lines, but don’t break the flow. No straight lines. Line that separates. Jawline. Ear tilt. Etc.

I feel my strokes aren’t all that subtle. Comments as to where I’ve done good and where I’ve strayed. I see you also change the distance between your form lines. I see why, but if you could comment on that just to make sure I get the reason right.

Larry