Thanks for sharing that Magnus! That piece is called Moon’s Rapture and as soon as i saw it, something dawned on me. A moon doesn’t fit in my image. My composition is off.
Frazetta’s piece has the figure in the mid-ground against a large moon which is working because there is a while figure there. Mine has partial figure and the figure is in the foreground – so i erased the moon!
i think it works much better even at this rough stage