I see 🙂 Like the references. I think you could tweak the drawing and make it look stunning.
* Move the bridge of the nose slightly to the right with an eraser
* Make the lower lip a tad smaller
* Accentuate the cheekbone a little bit, like if you could contour your face with makeup
* Add the baggy part of HER left eye to make it look more realistic
* Make her chin/neck area slightly larger to the left in the image
* Make the background dark and lose some edges
* Change the shape of her neck-collar-thingee 🙂
* Make the pupil in HER right eye slightly larger
Still in love with her right eye though!