Great job with the drawing. I normally never critique in the forums, I critique every Monday in the critique gallery. Critiques are posted Monday afternoon.
I encourage you to post a drawing every week in the gallery. As for this drawing it is quite lovely. On thing I can suggest is to incorporate more middle tone in your line. Be careful not to use dark line everywhere.
Why? Mainly because you want to save some of your dark outlines for the most important part of the drawing. I talk to this in lessons 16-21 in the new Concepts & Techniques figure drawing course.
Line is such an important attribute to use to your advantage.
I’ll look forward to your post in the gallery for next week’s critique. Post your photo reference too.